- Rating:
- R
- House:
- Riddikulus
- Genres:
- Parody Humor
- Era:
- Multiple Eras
- Spoilers:
- Philosopher's Stone Chamber of Secrets Prizoner of Azkaban Goblet of Fire
- Stats:
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Published: 10/06/2002Updated: 01/06/2005Words: 22,034Chapters: 11Hits: 61,665
The Ultimate Harry Potter Cliche Catalogue
Clam Chowder
- Story Summary:
- Ever noticed how some stories have remarkably similar plotlines? Or simply no plot at all? Then this is the story for you my friends. A humorous collection of commonly found stories from each genre, in which I point out the bleeding obvious and CAPITALISE completely RANDOM words! Mmmm... full of parody goodness! Now with 40% more sarcasm!
The Ultimate Harry Potter Cliche Catalogue 05 - Angsty Dark Fics!
- Posted:
- 02/14/2003
- Hits:
- 4,803
- Author's Note:
- Fifth chapter is here! Please don't hurt me. Whimper.
Cliché #5 - Angsty Dark Fics!
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[EXT: PRIVET DRIVE - SUMMER]
~ The story opens with HARRY doing his 'IM-A-SENSITIVE-AND-EMOTIONAL-GUY-PONDERING-THINGS-UNDER-A-TREE' schtick ~
HARRY
A dark, dreary and angst-ridden tale this is. Many soulful monologues, I will do. Speak like Yoda, I must.
DUDLEY
I am fat. Watch as I get into many comical situations involving my massive quantities of lard.
~ DUDLEY then CHOKES on his own CHIN, but only after being EXPOSED to several more WEIGHT-BASED jokes that aren't FUNNY or even REMOTELY INTERESTING ~
HARRY
No matter how crap my life is, I can always laugh at obscenely fat people.
~ HARRY smiles and LAUGHS. The READERS would do well to REMEMBER this moment, as it will NEVER happen again ~
PETUNIA
Get inside boy! It's time for your opening paragraph abuse session!
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[INT: ENGLAND'S ARMPIT - AKA 'THE DURSLEYS']
VERNON
Wonderful. You're here. Let the domestic violence begin!
HARRY
Oh........goodie.
~ The DURSLEYS subject HARRY to many CRUEL, PAINFUL and OUT OF CHARACTER punishments ~
HARRY
Hasn't anybody noticed that you've only just started to beat me up now that I am physically able to defend myself? If you really were the type to bash someone up for no reason, wouldn't you have done it back when I was a weenie little shrimp?
VERNON
What have I told you about making sense Potter?
HARRY
But-
VERNON
The last chapter already got shut down because it began making sense, so don't you go and jeopardise this one too. We haven't insulted nearly enough people yet! Now go off to your cupboard and nurse your injuries!
~ HARRY leaves for his CUPBOARD, the AUTHOR conveniently IGNORING the fact that he is supposed to have an ACTUAL bedroom now ~
THE AUTHOR
Shut up. Cupboards are much more tragic.
DUDLEY
He still looks like a total weenie to me anyway.
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[INT: STANKY CUPBOARD OF MAGICAL REPRESSION]
~ HARRY is DROWNING in SELF-PITY. In fact, it is SO BAD that he has started using INTOLERABLY BAD METAPHORS ~
HARRY
My life is like swimming through a hubcap full of infected toenails. Every morning I wake to a pain in my heart that is as intense as a fire in a lingerie factory.
~ It has now been established that HARRY is unnaturally DEPRESSED. We all feel EMOTIONALLY CONNECTED to him via his SUFFERING ~
HARRY
Why did my parents have to die, leaving me all alone in the world? Why must I be doomed to suffer the same torments year after year?
~ HARRY wrestles with INNER DEMONS until it is time for HOGWARTS ~
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[INT: THE PIT OF DARKNESS OR WHATEVER THE MALFOYS LIVE IN]
DRACO
I exude an aura of complete confidence and smuggery at all times, yet according to angst writers I am plagued by inner conflict.
~ He looks WISTFUL ~
DRACO
My father is a cruel and sadistic tyrant who wishes me to become an evil Death Eater like him. How can I tell him of my secret desire to become a Gryffindor and raise fluffy white puppies on a cosy little farm with Hermione? Or is it the life of a needlessly evil criminal that I want? I am so confused.
~ His facial expressions SWITCH intermittently, between 'ANGELIC' and 'DEMONIC' for SEVERAL paragraphs, until he is simply left looking CONFUSED and IRRITABLE. This look NEVER leaves his face again. ~
LUCIUS
I have a wonderful new game for you to play Draco.
~ He looks SINISTER ~
DRACO
Is it 'Let's All Burn Disturbing Images Into Our Forearms' again?
LUCIUS
Nope, this game is much more fun than that.
DRACO
Twisted? Sodopoly? Who Wants to Rape and Torture a Millionaire? Wheel of Misfortune and Terror?
LUCIUS
Shut up you imbecile. We're supposed to be creating tension here. This is a serious story with serious issues, not an advertisement for lousy board game rip-offs (available at all good toy stores)
DRACO
What have you got up your sleeve this time father?
LUCIUS
I'm not saying anything until you address me with a capital F.
DRACO
Sorry Father
~ LUCIUS smiles in an OVERLY CREEPY, WOODY ALLEN - TYPE way. This smile can ONLY mean ONE thing ~
LUCIUS
It's a lovely activity called 'incest' my dear boy. A game the whole family can play!
~ He then proceeds to RAPE his own SON without MERCY and without LUBRICATION of any sort. This is ALL described in GRAPHIC DETAIL for AT LEAST thirty lines. We are so APPALLED we want to VOMIT all over the monitor ~
NARCISSA
I am frail and abused. I desperately want to save my only child from this terrible life of pain and torture, but cannot be arsed to actually do anything about it.
LUCIUS
Narcissa, you simply must join in!
~ The MALFOY FAMILY engages in more INCEST ~
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[INT: HOGWARTS - YES, THEY FINALLY ARRIVED]
~ RON is looking MELANCHOLY. This is yet another GRIPPING DEVELOPMENT ~
HERMIONE
Oh jeezus, not you too Ron! Why is everybody so suicidal all of a sudden? Nothing's even happened to you yet!
RON
Exactly! Three pages into the parody and this is the first time I've been mentioned! Nobody cares about me. My life stinks.
~ The READERS all YAWN simultaneously ~
HERMIONE
Ron, we're not meant to be the focus of these stories. Harry's the star of this series, that's why we have 'supporting character' written on our name tags. Besides, you were mentioned a whole two lines before me!
RON
No I wasn't! Draco was talking about you in his monologue!
HERMIONE
Really? I thought the author edited me out so she wouldn't offend the D/G shippers.
~ RON looks SOUR ~
RON
Apparently not. Look, I don't care what you say. I have a severe inferiority complex and there's nothing you can do about it! I hate Harry! He's always stealing my thunder!
HERMIONE
It isn't his fault that you are a talentless hack.
RON
I don't care! I'm still going to get needlessly angry and betray him in four scenes anyway! I'll show everybody that I'm not just comic relief! I'll make them all PAY! Muahahahaha!
~ RON turns EVIL in WORLD RECORD time. He runs off to PLOT in DARK CORNERS and develop SHIFTY EYES ~
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[INT: THE BURROW]
GINNY
Hey! They left me at home! Dammit! This was supposed to be the scene where I start sensing evil everywhere with my dark magic radar thing that everyone always insists on giving me in this kind of fanfiction.
~ We hear CRICKETS chirping ~
GINNY
Why does that always happen after I say something?
~ GINNY, realising that I have been IGNORING her for the past FOUR chapters for NO REASON at all, begins to DRINK HEAVILY ~
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[INT: HAGRIDS JOINT]
~ HARRY and HAGRID are eating RAT CARCASSES ~
HARRY
So you see Hagrid, I firmly believe that my rhetorical development has had residual effects on my inner persona, which is caused but my sociological tendencies to delve deep into the mysteries surrounding my life.
~ By this point, the READERS are so FED UP with the pointless reflection, they are actually HOPING for another DISTURBING RAPE scene ~
HAGRID
Bin watching Daws'ns Creek again 'Arry?
HARRY
Maybe. But what would your advice be?
HAGRID
Well, 'fer you ter prop'ly understand yer 'eritage, yer simp'ly must get der 'arangolyn in yer lib'ry there an' work terwards yer 'ol go'ls.
~ In ADDITION to being HUNGRY and UTTERLY BORED, the poor READERS now have to figure out WHAT in the HELL HAGRID just said and try to get it to make SENSE ~
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[INT: THE BOYS DORM]
NEVILLE
Why didn't I get my own series? I'm almost an orphan. I can be just as interesting as Potter can! Nobody ever gives me more than two lines to say, they just cut me off at th-
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[INT: SLYTHERIN DUNGEONS]
~ VOLDEMORT is there. He has just finished RAPING some nameless FIRST-YEARS ~
DRACO
Holy shit, it's you! Erm, I mean ...... What are you doing here o' Master of Wonderful Badness? How did you get in?
VOLDEMORT
Hagrid's been keeping me as a pet for some time now. He is a very .... affectionate man.
~ There is a AWKWARD PAUSE ~
VOLDEMORT
But never mind that now; I have a task for you. If you succeed, you will become a Death Eater and live a life of misery by my side. If you fail, then I will personally peel all of your skin off, squeeze the juice from your limp body and hack you into a complex 3-D jigsaw puzzle.
DRACO
And people wonder why I'm depressed. What is the task, my lord?
~ The READERS are now nearly SOILING THEMSELVES in SUSPENSE at their first PLOT-SIGHTING ~
VOLDEMORT
You must seduce Hermione Granger and impregnate her with your devil's spawn!
DRACO
Hey man, don't be dissing my spawn like that. May I ask why you want me to do this?
VOLDEMORT
Because I'm sterile. Now piss off, I've got more raping to do.
DRACO
Whatever. It's not like I've never seduced anyone before. Gee, I sure hope I don't develop feelings in the short time I actually spend with her.
~ He LAUGHS ~
DRACO
As if that could ever happen!
~ DRACO runs off in search of HERMIONE ~
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[INT: A VERY SEDUCTIVE HALLWAY]
~ DRACO and HERMIONE are talking SEDUCTIVELY. For some reason, HERMIONE is in a NEGLIGEE ~
HERMIONE
Stop looking down at my heaving breasts. I don't want to sleep with you.
~ The MALE READERS are now FULLY AWAKE ~
DRACO
I want you bad Hermione. I'm a changed man.
HERMIONE
I don't believe you. You are scum between my toes.
~ They play clever MINDGAMES ~
HERMIONE
I don't believe you.
~ He gives her a DEEP and MEANINGFUL stare with his SEDUCTIVE grey eyes. The FEMALE READERS go all SWOONY ~
HERMIONE
I still don't believe you.
~ He does a GRATUITOUS NUDE sequence ~
HERMIONE
Damn, why didn't you show me that before?
~ The events that follow are only MODERATELY creepy. The AUTHOR has single-handedly CRASHED 'Thesaurus.com' in writing this EXPLICIT LOVE SCENE. Somewhere in the MIDDLE of all of this HERMIONE and DRACO have fallen in LOVE ~
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[INT: THE 14TH ANNUAL EVILDOERS CONVENTION]
~ RON is trying to convince people that he is EVIL. The READERS do not BUY it, not EVEN for a SECOND ~
RON
So you see gentlemen, I can help you kill Harry Potter.
VOLDEMORT
And what do you want in return for this?
RON
My own book series, starring me. And a live-action movie version of the books, starring me. And a crummy video game, starring me. And -
PETER PETTIGREW
Jeez. ..... do we really want Potter THAT bad my lord?
VOLDEMORT
Yes. He makes me look bad. And goodness knows we have to be sooo image-conscious nowadays!
RON
Is that a 'yes'?
VOLDEMORT
No, it's a 'we might not kill you just yet'.
RON
That's good enough for me!
~ RON tries to look UNTRUSTWORTHY ~
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[INT: SNAPE'S DUNGEON / BEDROOM / OFFICE / NAIL SALON]
~ SNAPE is delivering a HEARTFELT confession to NOBODY in particular ~
SNAPE
.....and that is how my secret childhood trauma turned me into a vicious psychopath. It doesn't help that I'm a vampire as well.
THE LOGICAL PART OF SNAPE'S BRAIN
Wouldn't people understand you a lot more if you actually told them why you are such an unpleasant person? They could probably help you.
SNAPE
Quiet you!
~ He continues to SUFFER through his pain all ALONE ~
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[INT: LUPIN'S SWINGING BACHELOR PAD]
LUPIN
I am so lonely and outcast.
~ SIRIUS arrives ~
SIRIUS
Hello Remus. Let's have an awkward moment in which we have flashbacks to when we suspected each other of treachery.
~ They DO ~
SIRIUS
Let us now exchange harsh words in an attempt to justify our feelings of guilt.
~ They TALK. This is followed by MORE TALKING, some DISSCUSSION, a DEBATE, some pointless INNEUNDO and a spot of TEA ~
LUPIN
Well, it's been brilliant chatting with you, but I really must dash off and endure several hours of blinding pain, in which I will blame myself for everything bad in the world.
SIRIUS
Good-o. I'll just go and have nightmares about my torturous years in Azkaban.
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[INT: ANY RANDOM ROOM]
~ This is officially the FIFTIETH POINTLESS CONFRONTATION scene in the story. HERMIONE is as BIG as a HOUSE. We have absolutely NO IDEA what is about to be REVEALED to us ~
HERMIONE
Draco, I'm pregnant.
DRACO
Score! I knew I was good for something! When is it due?
HERMIONE
Tomorrow.
DRACO
What? How does that work? We only got together last week!
HERMIONE
Who cares? The whole point of angst fics is to get us into situations we wouldn't normally be in, and as fast as humanly possible.
DRACO
Wow, you're right!
~ They do DRUGS and ATTEMPT SUICIDE ~
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[EXT: QUIDDITCH PRACTICE]
HARRY
Ron, you've been acting a bit strange lately. Is there anything wrong?
~ RON pukes up GREEN SLIME and ROTATES his head 360 DEGREES, whilst doing NAUGHTY things with his WAND and CURSING HARRY'S RIGHT TO LIVE ~
RON
Nope.
~ RON smirks at HARRY. It is fairly OBVIOUS that he has been CORRUPTED by EVIL ~
HARRY
Good. You are my bestest friend Ron. I'd be lost without you.
~ They play a BRIEF game of QUIDDITCH, but HARRY and DRACO are too busy with their EMOTIONAL DISCORD to do anything interesting, so the game is abruptly CANCELLED to make room for more MONOLOGUES ~
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[INT: A LARGE CHAMBER OR SOME CRAP LIKE THAT]
~ After a MULTITUDE of THINKING and TALKING and BETRAYAL and PAIN and much RAPING, we have finally arrived at the so-called 'CLIMAX' of the story. ~
VOLDEMORT
I am here to kill you Harry Potter!
(pause)
............again!
HARRY
Noooo! How did you know where to find me?
~ RON steps forward. He looks OMINOUS ~
RON
It was me, my old friend! It was I who betrayed you! I have gone over to the Dark Side!
~ The CHARACTERS present at the time GASP at this SHOCKING TWIST which is completely RUINED for the READERS by the fact that we already KNEW about it FIVE CHAPTERS AGO ~
HARRY
But....why Ron? I thought we were best friends.
RON
We were, until some kid with a keyboard decided to stink everything up.
~ HARRY makes a STIRRING speech about BROTHERHOOD and LOYALTY. Consequentially, RON is CONFLICTED as a result, but not enough to actually CARE ~
RON
Nah, I think I'll kill you anyway. I'll still have my groupies.
~ The RON FAN CLUB cheers loudly, blindly REFUSING to accept RON'S new EVIL STATUS ~
DRACO
Father, I don't think I want to be a Death Eater
LUCIUS
I'll kill you, you little turd.
~ SUDDENLY, everything goes to HELL ~
EVERYONE
I'll hurt / kill / rape you!
~ SEVERAL HUNDRED things happen all AT ONCE. Here is the ABRIDGED version of events;
VOLDEMORT kills DUMBLEDORE
HARRY kills RON and is consequently VERY UPSET
DRACO kills HIMSELF in his CONFUSION regarding his TRUE IDENTITY
HERMIONE then DIES in CHILDBIRTH
PETTIGREW runs AWAY and WETS his pants.
FRED and GEORGE engage in INCEST
GINNY slowly DRINKS herself into a COMA
SNAPE kills LUCIUS in ANGER and then murders SIRIUS (just for a lark)
LUPIN goes MAD from something WEREWOLF-RELATED
HAGRID is CASTRATED for no good reason
Several MUGGLES are RAPED and TORTURED
~
VOLDEMORT
None of that matters to me Potter. Once you are dead, I can finally take over the world.
HARRY
I suppose a happy life was simply not meant to be. I cannot be the flawless hero this time. I have failed in my destiny.
~ HARRY then DIES in a highly DRAMATIC way ~
THE READERS
What the hell? Did evil just win?
~ We are all DEEPLY CONCERNED about the AUTHOR'S emotional STABILITY ~
THE AUTHOR
I was sick of Harry winning. I love Harry Potter though, and I am sorry I killed almost every single character in a horribly savage way and made their last months alive miserable. Please review!
~ We all RUN off to read HUMOR FICS ~
[THE END]
A FEW FAIRLY IRRELEVANT COMMENTS
Apparently I invented a new word along the way without realising it ..... 'smuggery'. If it didn't exist before, it does now.
Odd chapter. Probably could have done more with it. Perhaps I will re-edit it one day, if I think of any more bits to put in.
Thankyou for all those lovely reviews! Happy to know that only one person (that I know of) has been seriously offended by the series. I think it's important to be able to laugh at yourself. And don't worry - I will eventually parody parodies as well!
Hooray for angst! Next on the chopping block ---- Crossovers.