- Rating:
- R
- House:
- The Dark Arts
- Characters:
- Other Canon Witch Other Canon Wizard Remus Lupin
- Genres:
- Horror Historical
- Era:
- 1944-1970
- Stats:
-
Published: 02/27/2009Updated: 02/27/2009Words: 1,744Chapters: 1Hits: 103
The Ringing - Young Remus Lupin
The Juvenyle Chylde
- Story Summary:
- What could make Remus Lupin such a reserved & fearful boy, rarely giving into the antics of his friends? I've endeavored to answer this. It's my 3rd finished fic ever. It isn't my 1st Remus fic, but it is the 1st I've posted. I'm a little nervous. I'm sort of a fanfic virgin, so be gentle with me.It's a small departure from the romantic stuff that is usually so well received by everyone, so I really hope that people get it. I would say enjoy, but given the content, the word might be ill-suited. In this, he's a young boy. It's set prior to going to Hogwarts, & immediately after the full moon following his recovery from the attack that Fenrir made on him.
The Ringing -- Young Remus John Lupin
- Chapter Summary:
- What could make Remus Lupin such a reserved & fearful boy, rarely giving into the antics of his friends? I've endeavored to answer this. It's my 3rd finished fic ever. It isn't my 1st Remus fic, but it is the 1st I've posted. I'm a little nervous.I'm sort of a fanfic virgin, so be gentle with me.It's a small departure from the romantic stuff that is usually so well received by everyone, so I really hope that people get it. I would say enjoy, but given the content, the word might be ill-suited. In this, he's a young boy. It's set prior to going to Hogwarts, & immediately after the full moon following his recovery from the attack that Fenrir made on him. I'm looking forward to knowing what you think, so good or bad, let me know.
- Posted:
- 02/27/2009
- Hits:
- 103
There was a ringing in his ears. Loud
and steady. Some piercing, infernal ringing. Offensive to his every
nerve, it roused the boy from his dreamless slumber.
The young
boy felt the hard, wet earth under his thin body and pressing his
jaw. He felt a patch of dry, loose dirt under his fingertips. They
stretched against it, feeling the grains and the dust of it move
according to his absent minded command. He was outside. Belly down on
the ground. The sparsest patches of sopping wet grass tickling his
limbs and the cold, slimy dirt told him this.
He couldn't
quite call it mud, this wettish dirt. Even if he could think to do
so. Of course, mustering thought in this groggy state proved a
challenge. It wasn't wet, like mud. It wasn't as thick. Or
differently so, to be honest. The ground was hard and stony just
beyond the thin layer of unpleasantly sticky, wet dirt. He wondered
if it had rained, though only barely, as his back felt crusty, but
was otherwise warm and dry, and his fingers in the dry dirt could
tell of locality. Also, there was something else giving rise to all
doubts of any muddy nature being held by the moisture. Something that
soaked only barely in, dwelling at the surface. Like a rain of
something more solid. Too confusing a thought. It wasn't quite
dismissed, but rather left to float about him.
The smells,
they were still alien to him. He couldn't place a one to its name,
although he could discern each from the other with an ease that would
have startled him, were he more awake and aware. Almost like clay and
metal. Something else. Something foul and sour, like sun spoilt meat.
Too many things.
There was a taste in his mouth.
Like coins or a cheap spoon without food to hold. Coppery. Metallic.
It wet his mouth uncomfortably. Thicker than water or saliva, and
disgustingly warm. An unpleasant taste to greet him. He'd have made a
face to express his displeasure were it not so difficult.
The
ringing. It came ever clearer into focus as he became ever more
conscious. He was exhausted. There was no denying that. But the boy
couldn't think of a proper excuse why he should be. He struggled to
press himself up, but his effort was as insignificant as his success.
He laid his face back into the sticky earth, trying to shut out that
blaring noise.
That noise. The ringing was clear, now. It was
revealed. It was... screaming. A woman. A woman's screaming.
Screeching. Intolerably constant and steady. It was boring into his
head. He tried to open his eyes to find the source, but the blinding
light of the sun paid him cruelly for the attempt. It had warned him,
after all. Warming his back as it did. His eyes squeezed shut to
fight the sound and the violent light, and what felt like a thin mask
of dried mud cracked lightly on his young features.
He knew
that voice. He didn't need to see to be certain anymore. It was his
mother. Her voice was piercing into him like a knife, thick with a
terror and disbelief. And a million things that someone so young
couldn't possibly understand. But he heard them, all the same.
He
had to go to her. To comfort her. Protect her. He opened his eyes in
slivers, seeing naught but white and eggshell yellow for an annoying
few seconds. Too many for his count. He tried again to push himself
up, as the blurring formed pictures before his eyes. His thin,
entirely lanky frame felt like it was made of stone, and he dropped a
little because of it. The ground was an unusual colour. A dark
reddish brown.
"Mum," he mouthed, little voice
leaving his lips.
His tongue pressed out against the top of
his mouth a few times, as though this would push the taste from it.
His tongue scraped against his teeth as he did so. The boy's hands
made themselves steady on the ground and the dizzy child pushed
himself to his knees. He wanted to focus. To stand. To help her. But
he was weaker than he had ever felt. Since recovering from an attack
that had him long bedridden, in any case. So recent was it, that it
all still seemed a blur of fictional imaginings. He looked around,
feebly trying to make sense of these sounds, tastes and feelings. His
crusted hand slid against his small stomach, so slightly larger than
usual that it was difficult to understand why it should feel so
swollen. Like he had stuffed himself on more sweets than he should
have, only there was no such pleasant taste to hang on his
tongue.
He saw entrails. Clear and unmistakable. They were
ripped asunder and strewn about, from one end of his small back yard
to the other. He felt sick. That heavy feeling in his stomach was
caused by whatever tragic beast he must have disemboweled. He
understood now.
He turned to his mother, running his hand
firmly over his face. Trying to wipe off what he now knew, beyond a
shadow of a doubt, to be blood. He'd had a change. They all said it
could happen. That it would happen. But he couldn't bring himself to
believe it before now. He was only a boy, after all.
He
couldn't imagine feeling more guilty than he did right then. He had
killed something. Taken its life. Robbed it of its last breath. And
something quite large, from the looks of the remains. He, an innocent
faced boy, was coated in the creature's blood, and bits of its tissue
clung to his flesh and remnants of his clothing. And worst of all,
even worse than stealing life from some beast, he had terrified his
poor mother so badly by the aftermath that she couldn't stop
screaming. His eyes could make out tears on her cheeks, and the
thick, red blotches they had burned there, and he felt even worse.
"Mum. Mum, it's alright," he tried, feeling
little strength in his voice. He knew that it wasn't. Nothing would
ever be alright again. He now knew that he was more a beast than
whatever he had killed the night before.
He felt so sick. She
must have assumed that he was dead when she came out, he reasoned.
She saw her skinny, little boy face down in a pool of blood and guts.
Everything moved faster and slower than reality, dizzyingly
overlapped to create three or more images of the same.
"I'm
unhurt," he told her, all too quickly aware of the lie. He felt
bruised all over every inch of his body.
He tried to stand,
but it took him a few attempts to succeed. His body was so heavy to
him. He stretched out a hand to her, but was too far to reach her. He
wanted to stroke her face. To wipe her tears away. Forgetting what
sin stained his hands, he wanted so badly to touch her and make her
better.
His nails were crusted with the blood of whatever he
had slain. Likely a large dog or deer, by the amount of mess on him
and the yard. He managed the few steps toward his mother, and he
reached out again, his thin arm managing close the distance between
himself and her. But before his fingers could find her skin, she
flinched, recoiling from his touch.
"Mummie? I-I'm
sorry! It's ... still me," he whispered; pleading, feeling his
features tremble. His voice was barely more than a whisper, and
though high and sweet, it held a hoarse and raspy quality that
cracked when he tried to speak.
Her screams had dissolved
into heavy sobs, and she reached a shaky hand to touch his head,
pulling back in little jerks before making contact. Only a second did
she linger, before her fingers fell away weakly.
"Remus,"
she whimpered in a breath, before retreating into sobs once more.
He
couldn't avoid surveying the damage. He could no longer meet his
mother's gaze. Not when she couldn't even seem able to bare to touch
him. It was all too painful. His head fell and then it wandered. So
much destruction. He couldn't fathom how such a little thing as he
could cause such a big upheaval. Blood drenched the ground and
spattered the walls of the house. He began to pity the creature more
than himself. It looked to be a horrendously painful death caused by
his hand. Or whatever he had to use then. Clawed paws and monstrous
teeth. Flashes of memory crossed his mind, but barely enough to read
the encounter. Not that he wanted to. He stepped backward, and again,
nearly turning a full circle before spying the head of the
creature.
It was marred, but still ever intact. And the face
of his father, forever plastered in an expression of utter terror,
stared back at him. The eyes, vacant as a glass, stared into him and
looked at nothing, all at once.
His father had always been so
tall. So strong. Invincible. And now, there was almost nothing left
of the once impressive figure that had always stood as some great,
compassionate god to him.
He tried to scream, but no voice
came. Only a raspy ghost of sound, like the screams of the sleeping,
left his lips. A feeling of burning tingles over a freezing chill
swallowed his entire body, and his knees gave out, slamming him down
to the ground with a harsh sound. His stomach raged against him, and
every last shred of his father forcefully ejected itself from his
body, washing the taste over his tongue. Again and again, the spirits
left him, the acrid bile throwing itself from his little mouth. He
deserved this, and he knew it. Tears as hot as fire scorched his
mournful eyes and little cheeks as they flooded angrily from
him.
His body, weaker and ever more exhausted, collapsed
forward. He was too weak to even notice the horribly warm and slimy
mess of a squishy, sopping soup of organs that cushioned his fall and
made his bed. A ringing took his ears and mind again, and with his
last shred of conscious thought, his small and trembling fingers
reached forward apologetically, to stroke a lock of his father's
hair.
~~~~*~~~~
I imagine that his mother decided that Fenrir killed her husband, and she eventually laid the blame squarely with him. But I also imagine that this is something that she frequently must remind herself of. She still loves her son, but nothing has ever gotten back to perfect with either of them. He feels undeserving, and she tries to forget what can never be forgotten.